We were also given feedback from the pitch and Louise took photos! (and i didn't have time to powder my nose!)
FEEDBACK FOR THE POWER-POINT PITCH:
- good use of conventions
- detailed and informative to the audience without giving too much away.
- clear and easy to understand with pictures to explain.
- some aspects planned are not conventional for a noir film.
- More pictures need to be used
We took all the comments into consideration and were very pleased with them also.
Here are the pictures :)
Here is the pitch that we presented to the class and our lecturer (Louise)
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